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		<title>100% Online Student Success</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Apr 2008 02:39:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeremy</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This was one of the most comprehensive projects I worked on for Delmar Cengage Learning. It began with a developmental edit of psychologist, Roxanne DuVivier&#8217;s manuscript. I was brought on to make the textbook flow for its intended audience: students. Where the script needed additional support, I contributed copy (in the areas of Communication, Health [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.textmarksthespot.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/oss.jpg"><img class="alignleft alignnone size-medium wp-image-73" style="float: left;" title="100% Online Student Success" src="http://www.textmarksthespot.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/oss-259x300.jpg" alt="100% Online Student Success" width="259" height="300" /></a>This was one of the most comprehensive projects I worked on for <a href="http://www.delmarlearning.com/" target="_blank">Delmar Cengage Learning</a>. It began with a developmental edit of psychologist, <a href="http://www.careersuccess.delmar.cengage.com/authors/duvivier.aspx" target="_blank">Roxanne DuVivier</a>&#8217;s manuscript. I was brought on to make the textbook flow for its intended audience: students. Where the script needed additional support, I contributed copy (in the areas of Communication, Health and Technology).</p>
<p>I then made the Online Learning Companion (for students) to the core text. I created assessment quizzes for each of the 9 chapters and wrote 2 tip sheets per chapter. Tips include topics ranging from budgeting to ergonomics to stress reduction. Finally, I created a selection of Web Resources to further supplement the content.</p>
<p>I was also asked to edit the Online Learning Companion (for instructors). I edited lesson plans, created 9 more quizzes and wrote PowerPoint presentations for teaching the material.</p>
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		<title>Milady U &amp; Salon Training International</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Apr 2008 02:36:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jeremy</dc:creator>
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Milady is an imprint of Delmar Cengage Learning. I hadn&#8217;t realized this, but Milady has been around for 80 years.  Milady U and Salon Training International (STI) make up the training division of Milady. The online university provides continuing education courses to salon and spa owners, technicians and stylists. 
I worked with Susie Carder, [...]]]></description>
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<p><a href="http://www.milady.cengage.com/" target="_blank">Milady</a> is an imprint of <a title=" " href="http://www.delmarlearning.com/about/" target="_blank">Delmar Cengage Learning</a>. I hadn&#8217;t realized this, but Milady has been around for 80 years.  <a href="http://www.milady.cengage.com/miladyu/index.aspx?sIndex=miladyu" target="_blank">Milady U</a> and <a href="http://www.salontraining.com/" target="_blank">Salon Training International</a> (STI) make up the training division of Milady. The online university provides continuing education courses to salon and spa owners, technicians and stylists. <strong><em></em></strong></p>
<p>I worked with Susie Carder, founder of <a href="http://www.ybn.com" target="_blank">Your Beauty Network</a>, to create <a href="http://www.milady.cengage.com/miladyu/catalog.aspx?sIndex=miladyu" target="_blank">5 online courses</a> for Milady U. Based on information provided by Susie, I wrote all the content, speeches and presentations. I also created the quiz questions and final exam. Course descriptions follow. Scroll down for screen shots. PowerPoint presentations are <a href="http://www.textmarksthespot.com/category/powerpoint-presentations/" target="_self">here</a>.</p>
<p><strong>How to Work Smart &amp; Make More Money</strong></p>
<p>In this course, you learn how to work smarter, not harder. We teach you a step-by-step  								system that the top salon professionals in America are using to make a six-figure income. You will learn information to immediately grow your salon sales, as well as how to increase  								the amount your clients spend with you.  You&#8217;ll also find out why it is good business to  								recommend retail products!</p>
<p><strong>Getting Retail Results!</strong></p>
<p>In this course, you learn a step-by-step system for increasing your retail sales.  								You learn how to service your clients – NOT sell them- with retail recommendations.   								You will get  								information you can immediately use to grow your retail sales.  Find out how to increase  								your retail purchases by 50% or more.  This is a three-step system that anybody can use to  								increase retail return.</p>
<p><strong>Double Your Day with No Additional Clients!</strong></p>
<p>In this course, you learn techniques that the most successful professionals are using to  								increase their add-on service sales, keep their clients happy, and make more money in less  								time. These are skills a hairstylist, esthetician, nail technician, or massage therapist  								can use to double their day.  You’ll learn how to increase your service sales by at least  								50%, improve your client satisfaction, and increase your income.</p>
<p><strong>How to Find and Hire the Staff That&#8217;s Right for You!</strong></p>
<p>In this course, you learn a system for recruiting. You learn how to set up a recruiting                                  strategy that attracts the right people and creates a waiting list of applicants.                                   It’s all about how to recruit the right team, and we&#8217;ll show you the pros and cons of                                  experienced technicians vs. new technicians.  You also learn how to effectively advertise                                  for and interview new recruits.</p>
<p><strong>Salon Profitability &#8211; How to Find It and Keep It!</strong></p>
<p>Did you know approximately 74% of the salons and spas in the U.S. are NOT profitable?                                  In this course, you learn how to create a salon or spa that is profitable. You also find out the biggest profit mistakes most owners make. You will learn how to effectively advertise for your unprofitable salon or spa.</p>
<p><strong>Each course includes:</strong></p>
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<li>4-5 sections of information</li>
<li>20-25 quiz questions and a final exam</li>
<li>4 PowerPoint presentations</li>
<li>10 avatars spoken by an industry professional</li>
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